ext_56454 ([identity profile] twinsarein.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] old_school_clex 2009-05-09 03:39 am (UTC)

Re: Part 2

Fun and awesome. You had me right there at the Talon with Clark and I loved the examples of other embarrassing moments in his life. The first one was especially appropos.

You could have ended it when he ran out of the room, but I'm so glad you didn't. The conversation in the barn was wonderful and revealing, and left me imagining them back at the mansion each doing their version of a strip tease for the other.

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